Poem -
Cold Heart...
I offered you my cold heart...
You lit the fire to bring a volcano of emotions
Ice -heart ...slowly melts to your words
Touched my innermost thoughts
And lay me on a bed of roses
Gone are the fears to the depths
We rode the wind ascending higher
Leaving darkness in its place
I offered you my cold soul...
All I had ...you accepted the challenge
Now we move through the perfumed mist of love
As the pieces of my heart come together
Like Intertwined candles ...we will melt
with each others spirits
You burned me with desire and ope
Now...I offer you my warmed heart..
As you unlocked and set me free....
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Comments
tina
this is profound, perfect, and beautiful in every way!
im relating with this!
hope you r well!
Thank you Stephen -our souls have room for another try lol slowly but surly we open our hearts .
Thank you my friend .nice to see yours too :) Tina x
well said tina!
love is worth it, I know it is!
wish you well tina
(Lil) Sis,
Not only did i enjoy the innocense and purity of this lovely poem but your comment to Stephen as well, (Lil) Sis....Our souls have room for another try and slowly but surly, we open our hearts for another...Lines of special interest as follows...
Jim
I offered you my cold soul...
All I had ...you accepted the challenge
Now we move through the perfumed mist of love
As the pieces of my heart come together
Like Intertwined candles ...we will melt
with each others spirits.
&
You burned me with desire and hope
Now...I offer you my warmed heart..
As you unlocked and set me free....
cold heart is something i thought i had because i kept people at a distance for so long but finally melted it to let someone in. no stopping me now but i still believe in souls connecting first .thank you for a valuable comment jim and smiling to get your response ,much admired friend :) Tina x
It was the way I felt back then and my heart has melted to a degree.But ...its still on the ice ….
Great write!
Really enjoyed!
Love the imagery of your words and descriptive words of emotions. x)
emotions are the words cactus woman x and words can make the emotions x tina x
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