Poem -
" CONTEMPLATING CRUCIFIXION "
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In this, the blood of my discontent
I'm flogged, and left flailing
The flesh torn ,
From my back.......
Does not the hierarchy
Understand me
Or am I an idiot,
For when the thorny roses
Pierce my fortune
And my immediate ability
To provide,
Do I not rise up in stride
Or glide
On family laudits,
Am I a feather
Or a sheet of armor
Shall I vie
Or die
For, belief seems nary
To me now
Am I disabled
A beggars
Cow,
Or am I
My fathers
Son.......?
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
An incredible write Tony!!
One to savour. Will make a fav.
Luv From Jai :)
Wow Jai Masters!! (I hope you don't mind).......I just think your full name is smokin' bro!!........thanx for this comment man............and thanx so much for taking the time to find this...........appreciate that my friend.............later..........T xo
Oh wow in touch spiritually or what, killer write bro , absolutely gobsmacked right now
I'm cheering from the front row of cathedral hall, how did you learn to fly so high my word I'm so dam proud of you, huge hugs and kisses, deano your not so big sister from another Mr xox :) ❤ xoxox
Hey Deano!!.........stop it!!.........you're my BIG Sis..........no matter what you say.........If it wasn't for you........I would not be here..........with Cosmo as my work station..........you're an inspiration my friend...........thanx for this girlfriend!!.............love and rockets..............T xo
T you've always been a deep Mamma Jamma, and here intelligence and brilliant poetry merges seamlessly, hey Dexter as a background image? How cool is that....yes the idea of someone questioning their beliefs and waiting for answers is so incredibly positive and reassuring to me, making it personal, having it touch your skin, that is real and inspiring.... you put so much passion and intelligence into a point of view....I had to read this poem 3 times to grasp it, and I have the attention span of a dead monk,so that is testament to your ability to hold this cynical bastard reader with syntax, that is magic... this is a flat out rocket ship of a write, very cool to read bro.
Chris ~ you're so friggin' cool!!.......you're the only person that's mentioned the Dexterism!! (lol!)............rocket ship!!.........God bless you my friend.........always find pearls in your comments.........you're a true believer......and a consummately giving poet .........ttyl.........T xo