" CONVERGENCE " ( eating my soul away )
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When I consider the lotic pain
My disease is causing me
My skin crawls
With the hurt of it
My Love is all alone
And cryin'
While my mother needs me home
For soon, she'll be dyin'
And I am stuck in the rocks
On the shore
Of pain's disgrace
Where I wonder about Convergence
Why so much pain and Love
Bloom together
In such a tiny space
Is there a reason
For God to have taken
My strength
And just given it away
During the very days
So much Love
Has come my way
I feel like crawling
Into a darkened hole
And crying for the child
My pain
Has made of me
Then
In the darkness
Of my despair
All I can do
Is pray and learn
That without the use of words
My soul
Would fade away....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
To read this is to go on an emotional journey !
It takes experiences of discomfort and the rougher side to living to be able to write with this intensity !
An accomplished write indeed !
Best wishes.
WOW Sir Richard!!..........you hit the nail RIGHT on the friggin' head brother..........I LOVE this comment........thanx so much for this my friend!!...............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Hello Tony...
The heart strings are pulled on this my friend...
Wishing you love and Sunshine!
To come your way to dry away your tears...
Hugz...
Feathers
Hey Feathers!!...........thanx for the Love and Sunshine sweet poetess...........hope all is well...........Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
Hi Tony. Wow, a heavy reality! Hope you've found some sunshine too! Looking forward to reading more of your writes as time goes by.
Hey Steve!!......thanx so much for taking the time to go to my page bro!!..........always appreciate a writer going out of his way............very cool..........thanx again.............T xo
I love this poem tony. My thoughts and prayers are with you. Go DallasCowboys
WOW hardrocklover!!.....didn't expect this............yep!..........HUGE Cowboys fan.............thanx for the kindness.........and........Welcome to COSMO!!...........T xo
Beautifully written. G xx
YAY Georgie!!..........happy to see you here sweetheart............sent you a message...........kisses.........T xo
lotic pain...praise and honor for use of that..PRO fo sure.
and you are using the words well . :
That without the use of words
My soul
Would fade away....
You have already achieved the non-fade !!!
love and super novas
Wow Mark~ you give some awesome comments brother..........I love that you pointed out those last few words..............no one else did...........and they were the most important to me.............I appreciate it........truly man!...............Love and Super Nova's (lol!)................T xo
tony sorry to hear of this pain you live with, I wish I could take some and I would share in your struggles. love the write it is truly beautiful
"All I can do
Is pray and learn
That without the use of words
My soul
Would fade away...."
Tony,
I love these sentences thanks for your sharing !
Sophy
Hi Sophy Chen!!...........thank you so much for this my friend............you hit the nail right on the head in choosing those lines from this write...........sums It all up ..............well done and much appreciation.........hugs-n-smiles...............T xo
heyyyy brother....LOVE AND PAIN....hmmmm...yep, they go together like cereal and milk...except cereal and milk don't hurt.... We live in both worlds, tethering on the brink of pain and love, longing for both, and none.... The words we write help to a degree...as it clears out our mind....and soul... Keep writing brother...that is the only way out....we will see an end to pain one day.....and love will rule.....
Hugs angel...Giggles the Poet
Hey Giggles!!.........sorry I missed this............I'm with you..........writing DOES help me greatly...........and I know that it will be Love again that helps to guide my life.........right now I'm being pulled into my Love of God more deeply than I had ever known possible...........it's interesting how .......as you said.........Love rules ~ one way or another.................thanx for this my friend............talk soon............T xo