Poem -
Cosmic Truth
Its a broad topic, said the snail to the microcosm
I'veΒ always believed in you
Help me toΒ populate this earth
Then, we'll see what we can do!
If you can knit a sweater
Then I can do it too
I'll toss the stars up in the sky
And help you
Become
Anew,
Said the snail
To the microcosm
We have such Godly
Work to do,
And for "The very first time"
The world
Began spinning,
In
Greased,
Grooves...
Tony Taylor
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Comments
This shows your deep involvement in ideas and theories of creation with your analytical mind willing to contend with all perspectives from various sources. Your aim to enlighten the reader on options of comprehension and contemplation leads to poetry of a mystical and magical quality.
Involved piece.Β
Thanks for sharing. Β :) Β Best wishes as always.
Hey Thanx SIR WATERS!!!.....yours are the words that provide the understanding I, as a writer, aim for in considering that which I aspire to convey.....much appreciation kind sir!!.......smiles.......T xoΒ Β ?
What a cute write Tony the snails are cute as well. thank you for sharing your wondrous talent.
XX Lisa
Thanx DARKLY!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS !!........T xo. ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Powerful words that can only be commented on with the freedom of poetic comprehension. Β I see the snail leaving the safety of his shell, bonding with the microcosm. Β He promises his help, that together they will do God's work. Β As they join forces, the rotation of the Earth begins and it's axis runs smoothly.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Hey LARRY!!..... this is such an insightful comment brother....... and a very intelligent interpretation........ you, dear poet....... are a bad ass!!......LOVE IT!!.......thanx so much my friend!!......hugs-n-high fives!!.........T xo.