Poem -
Could Have Been
Sometimes I feel so alone.
I feel lost I feel gone.
I try so hard to get away from the hurt but there's nowhere to Rome.
i am very close but feel so far from home.
I lay in bed wondering what my life could have been.
If my real parents were not such a sin.
people tell me i am going to be just like them and with them ill fit right in.
But the thing is I don't want to be just like them.
I am not going to be such a sin.
With my family now I fit right in.
So no more wondering what my life could have been.
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Hey BRAZELENA!!......this is an intense read....... and truly compelling subject matter........ it's very kind of you to share this ........and I would imagine it was somewhat helpful for your interior life to get this down on paper....... you have been blessed to find the right family for you now....... sounds like you've been through some tough experiences ........and this write was VERY well considered..... and delivered with class and lovely poetic prose ........ALL STARS!!...... well done!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✳✴☀
yes i have been through a lot but i try not to let that effect me and yes i have a wonderful family now and i can honestly say i am blessed that they found me thankyou
Hello brazelena...
This reminds of the commercials with the lady who wears the striped tube socks and she turned into her dad...
The guy who turned into his parents...
I told everyone that knows me if I start to act like mine...
Please, just shoot me...
They had a few good things, and I tried really hard to focus on that...
:)
No one's perfect...
I'm glad you have a family that fits...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
I just wanted to say thank you for all of your positive comments. it means a lot
Excellent poem! Do you think that in the line, "If my real parents were not such a sin." Instead of saying "were not," it would sound better as weren't ? (If my real parents weren't such a sin.) That's just my opinion let me know yours.
yeah maybe thanks