Poem - 04 February 2018, 20:06

Cracked Ashes

you ever had a dream
that the mind
has become
Ashes
cracked
upon the
senses?

A Distortion
of such
where
vertigo
meets
the imagination
and reality
is held
into a
secret
vault
with the
key
held
by
the demons
within

Have you ever
felt this
way
or is it just
indigestion
due to
a late
night
desire
to
eat
dominos......................

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sparrowsong04 February 2018, 20:10

WGreg...

Dominos late night, definitely...

Freaky Freaky!

Thank you for reminding me don't eat it past 7...

I owe you big time!

Great Fun Write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

GREG TUCKER THE...04 February 2018, 20:22

thanks sparrowsong

Dean Kuch04 February 2018, 21:03

Just like Gremlins, Greg, we too have to be very careful what we ingest late at night.
Ebenezer Scrooge thought Jacob Marley's ghost might have been a bit of undigested beef or a bit of potato.
Having said that, it's difficult to give you an adequate answer to your poetic query.
I can tell you this; I enjoyed reading it.
~Dean :}