Poem -
CRAZY BUZZ
God, what happened last night?
The drums throbbing with lust
Naked dancers painting powerful penis
A young boy torn and sobbing
And the dew of the morning
Smoldering across the floor
Like a snake crawling away
To hide next door
In her cleavage
And smiling
In sin
Must have been
A crazy buzz
Fueled by amazon juice
And slippery silk garments
Piled in a pile
On a hot
Playgirl
Crazy buzz
As I pick my stuff up
And light
My last
Butt
And blow smoke
Into sexy
A lethal
Crazy buzz.........
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Creative, hehe blushing slightly when reading again, well done, your different Tony, keep writing sweetheart, much love xx
Thank you so much Miss Sanderson, I was afraid someone might kick me off of this site for that poem........it just came out like that, I had no choice..........(smiles)...you're too groovy....tony
I was unsure of what you meant by "a young boy torn and sobbing." Nevertheless, risqué poetry has been well received for some time now. Some women, especially feminist, might frown, but most will receive this poem in good humor.
I agree with Glenn, I was unsure about that bit too. Overall it`s a good piece and very brave of you to write it. I must say though that I`m not keen on poetry with swearing in it or explicit text !! but that is just me, I`m old fashioned that way!! A well written and cleverly thought through piece sweety, well done. Love George xx
If that sentence of the young boy sobbing in the corner, and the word ,( excuse me), penis weren't so close nit, it wouldn't bring that first reaction, Tony you may need to explain the theory / story write behind this one, ( i get a young boy in self discovery, porn magazines , and a very over active imagination / maybe even high on something, hallucination / pain killers
Thanks Nardine I think you're right......Crazy Buzz is about a guy who wakes up at the party he attended the night before and what he encounters when he wakes up. What he remembers, and doesn't remember, he is trying to piece together.....by saying "Wow! That must have been a crazy buzz I had last night" As for the boy in the corner, he see's the boys torn clothing and wonders just how "out of control" the party got.....and he grabs his last smoke to leave and contemplate whether or not he's done something wrong. I hope that makes it a little clearer....sorry I didn't get it quite right, I'll get better...I think?....so cool of you to ask nardine.........hugs-n-smiles to you.......see you on deck (lol).....tony