Poem -
~Creeping Death~
The darkness swallows me whole
Where do broken hearts go
When the beats begin to fade slow
It's a sad tragedy when you die slow
Emptiness is the lowest whoa
Silver tears fall slow as I close my eyes
I disappear into the unknown
And my pain is lifted I am free to fly and explore
I feel nothing of what hurt me before.
?Broken187Soul ?
Copyright 10-22-16
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Wow!!..... what a fantastic write JEANIE!!....... darkness brought to life!!....... with stunning phrasing and impeccable timing....... the whole thing, including the picture, feels like a "Tim Burton" kind of artistic endeavor!!..... I'm hoping that the pain referenced here isn't a real part of the inspiration behind this piece....... either way.......I pray that the write itself brought some release....... an excellent write!!.......ALL STARS....PINNED!!........LOVE and ROCKETS !!......T xo.
Thank you for your kind words. ?