" The Crimes Of A Blackened Soul "
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I am a sinner who dare's, and as such I share
Decadence you may expect
Evil animation, left handed urination
None by my own elect
Yet as I compare, my sins and affairs
A mulatto's state of mind
I must confess, I am divided by stress
I cannot comprehend my crime...
Is there hate behind this, moralistic judgment
Where my soul dares to dwell
Swimming in colors two, cast as blue
Painting paranormal hell
Vain hopes are cropped, all bragging stopped
Both are silenced and mute
For I have become, the gardener's pond scum
A two-faced house of ill-repute.....
Where whores and witches, fulfilling dark wishes
Or grace for you too tender
I pray to persevere, through these darkest of years
And sucking my thumb surrenders
Else then my grace, cease to be grace
For the color of my skin a lie
And sinners without race, have nothing to trade
When considering the keys to life....
Tony Taylor  (Chicago)
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I love the dark emotion,this is so raw and straight from your core.Just amazing,I miss my dearest friend Jeremee Henessee,while reading this(like you he is excellent in dark poetry).No one could change the perception of someone so neglect them. Smiles,xx
piu
I love the dark emotion,this is so raw and straight from your core.Just amazing,I miss my dearest friend Jeremee Henessee,while reading this(like you he is excellent in dark poetry).No one could change the perception of someone so neglect them. Smiles,xx
piu
Piusha!!........I too miss Jeremy........and am honored that you used his name in conjunction with mine........he is my favorite poet from Cosmo..........sheer brilliance unblemished ........can't tell you how much I appreciate your comment sweet poetess..........i'll be seeing you around I'm sure..........thanx again.........and I WILL neglect those opinions friend...........smiles..........T xo
Lol...i haven't seen those special effects ,errr....always this happens with me,thanks for ignoring.Truly Jer is a profound writer whom i admire the most from cosmo.C U around.Good night dear friend.xx
Brother T
Woe is me....in the nicest way I could possibly say...BRAVO!!
Were you in between two parallel planes when you wrote this ? Â Cherie hit the nail on the head for the words I was seeking once again shall be said...'Creative Phrasing'....to perfection my friend
What an opening to an opus of obvious talent !!
Your dark writes are superb and I take my hat off to you.
Sis C :)
Sista Carey Milton!!,.........I am shocked at the response I got to this write..............I've even gotten some private messages asking for some more Dark writes...........guess I'm gonna have to comply...........thanx so MUCH for the way cool comment girlfriend..............love and rockets!!.............tony xo
Great write dear Tony, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Mr.Maveli my friend........I can't believe you did this.......thank you so much for taking a dive into my poetry...........I LOVE that you did this.........my opinion of you is changing brother........there are a LOT of men on here that could use your support.........thank you SO VERY much big guy!!.........ttyl.......T xo
Whatever you are doing right now to write like this, i want in on hehe, another brilliantly constituted write bro, keep on being awesome xoxo love ya heaps, deano xoxo
Hey Deano!!........I'm taking mushrooms........sshhhhh!!.........don't tell anyone......LOL>>>LOL.......you're the coolest.........smiles.........T xo
Tony......wow brother this was had an unstoppable ground shaking flow that gripped me I literally smiled while reading just because of how good this sounded and felt, I have to add this to myfavorites. ..man I guess I'm sorry I've never read your stuff, I'm never on
CO
But this was awesome and regardless of my spelling errors above I am an instant fan
Wow Curious!!..........this is one of the best comments I've EVER received............so cool that you added the word "felt" in there............makes me feel something I don't get to experience too often.......truly appreciated brother!..............ttyl..............T xo