Poem -
Crushed
A single flower
Gently leaning with the breeze
Carefree
But with such vivid beauty
Soft delicate petals
Yet striking and bold
Filling the air with an intriguing scent
Mesmerising to all those near
Why would anyone destroy such a thing?
Crushed by one man, one hand
That was all it took
The lean stem providing a lifeline
Torn apart
Those delicate petals
Crushed
Nothing left
Just an empty space
Where beauty once swayed
Carefree, now gone
Life and soul taken
What for?
It's wrong
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Comments
omg! you just posted it and it just popped up. that is amazing. I love the way you finished it.
"Life and soul taken
What for?
It's wrong"
it leaves the person thinking. You've really got talent
Thank you. This is quite new to me but really addictive!
I'm sure there is more to come. X
I'm just curious, when did you join cosmofunnel?
Only last week but it took me a few days to pluck up the courage to write.
omg. so brave of you! you really do have talent. can i send you a friend request?
Of course!
yay! i have a new friend. I think I like you.
Thank you drunkenwolf.....I love this one too. Have been too busy with work to let the creative writes flood out. Must make more time! X