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Curious Talking To Derek

Curious Talking To Derek

Curious: No, it was an anomaly truly, his mind was unfit he was rough and unruly

           Derek: All I'm trying to say is that life must be like paper in the sense that there is only so much you can write before the page rips

Curious: Possibly, though if he had handled his parchment properly then probably it wouldn't have ripped and he wouldn't have slipped into the darkness that he calls "honesty"

           Derek: Probably, but what is honesty nowadays?

Curious: Seriously?

           Derek: Yes.

Curious: Extinct clearly

           Derek: Why?

Curious: Ask yourself

          Derek: He was a genius in his own right, people just never see, its like they're all blind and don't know where to go

Curious: And you're supposed to be an exception to the status quo?

           Derek: Hmm...

Curious: You're terrible, there is a fine line between being a madman and being a psycho, and yes, it does matter, our friend here just happened to be the latter

           Derek: So what, your saying you wouldn't go a little crazy in that situation?

Curious: No, I'm clearly stating that at least I would be patient

           Derek: Patience belongs to peacetime, when the situation becomes dire...

Curious: (sighing) "Mankind panics like a man on fire"

           Derek: So you get it.

Curious: Mankind does not represent one kind of man, whats in my gift basket may be different than the basket in your hand

           Derek: But respectively they're both gift baskets,...right?

Curious: Your missing the point

           Derek: There is no point to be made, he shouldn't be blamed

Curious: But all the same...

         Derek: Don't even start again

Curious: Fine then lets just bring it to an end

                                                  FIN

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sparrowsong

Very interesting conversation between you and Derek...

Umm...

You are a very interesting person Curious...

I am sure I don't have to say that...

Awesome...

sparrowsong

You are an interesting person I must say...

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Curious Onlooker

Assuming you mean interesting in a good way, thank you, I tried to leave a lot for the imagination with this write,

CO

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sparrowsong

Oops repeated...

I should have warned you...

Parrot side of things has appeared...

Sorry...

sparrowsong

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Curious Onlooker

Feel free to give feedback on what you think we we're talking about

CO

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sparrowsong

Yes definite compliment to you Curious...

Puzzle?

If I am wrong please correct me...

The sense I am getting with this write is a psychotic writer who's story has taken him to the dark side and he went CRAZY!

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Curious Onlooker

Yes you get an A for effort, not saying your wrong because I like your view of the conversation, once I get at least one more feedback I'll say who I think was the closest and thanks again

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sparrowsong

Can't wait...

You got me curious...Curious...

sparrowsong

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Curious Onlooker

With all that being said both Sparrowsong and Kei kei had a piece of the puzzle connected and your views we're as interesting to read as the poem was to write, and no matter the real answer I meant for this Poem to be decided by the reader, so for now it is as you see it, but if you're really curious I can inbox you the answer so as not to ruin it for anyone else who reads it
CO

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sparrowsong

Yes Please INBOX...

Thanks Curious...

sparrowsong

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