Poem - 19 February 2017, 16:11 Contest Nominees Current Emotion alone All of my time All of my heart All of my mind All of my soul Was given to you And you threw it away Like it was nothing And I can't get them back They're lost in the void Of my empty heart Like 2 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1793 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Love Poetry Genre: Tragedy Listed in: Contest Entries 6 comments
Richard Waters19 February 2017, 16:56 An immense amount of hurt is conveyed in this poem. It shows how cruel life experience can be. This has depth well beyond the norm. Looking forward to more from your pen ! Welcome to Cosmofunnel. Warmest wishes ! :) Reply
Richard Waters20 February 2017, 17:01 :) Thanks for sharing your poetry !! All the best to you. Reply
Catarina Lima20 February 2017, 08:40 I'm in tears. This is so deep, yet so shallow. So dark, yet so light. So simple... so complex. Reply
Michelle Fish21 February 2017, 09:53 So much pain and emotion in this I literally felt your pain and it went so deep cause I've been treated and done like this. Thanks for sharing your poetry. Reply
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An immense amount of hurt is conveyed in this poem. It shows how cruel life experience can be. This has depth well beyond the norm.
Looking forward to more from your pen !
Welcome to Cosmofunnel. Warmest wishes ! :)
Thank youu :)
:) Thanks for sharing your poetry !!
All the best to you.
I'm in tears. This is so deep, yet so shallow. So dark, yet so light. So simple... so complex.
haha thanks :))
So much pain and emotion in this I literally felt your pain and it went so deep cause I've been treated and done like this. Thanks for sharing your poetry.