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curtains closed.

Hell can be many things
And you can have yours
Mine is brighter

I have thought to bring flowers
And chocolates and wine
Though invited no guests
To my table to dine

Hell can be many things
you can have yours

To be sure I've ambled 
All versions of course

Tempestuous Street is 
The vision beyond
lives full of sunlight 
and alien feet
But I have my devils
my horns and a flame
Desires to never step
In yours again

curtains closed.

M ~

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Shirley Harrison

You brought the dark alive in the most beautiful effective poem, as always dear Marion, I felt every last emotional detail 🌹 

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Marion

Thanks so much lovely friend x

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Bernadete van d...

This is a hell of a poem about Hell. But I know that it's a sad one for you, Marion. As you say...Curtains closed! I say no more.
P.S.  Good to have you back, we missed you here. A big Hug, B 
 

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Marion

Ah thankyou lovely B x

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sparrowsong

Hello Marion...

What happens when it's caused by someone else?

​​​​​​Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

S x

 

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Marion

Hi S...thanks so much for your thoughts love x

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John Prophet

Hell can be found on earth. I find few examples of heaven.
Wonderful expressions 

 

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Marion

I'm always on your wavelength John... me neither x thankyou

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Being Me

Oh...what a wonderful poem this is! It's true, we all have our own hell (if that's what you want to call it). We all have our own demons to slay — or live with. A dark poem that accepts the darkness.

Your work, as always, is outstanding.  Hugs dear friend  xx

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Marion

You are too kind...but I've told you this before...keep it coming lol!!! You know those days when the door stays locked and the curtains stay closed...thankyou T...hugs xx

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Being Me

Oh, I do know those days. They're actually quite snug xx

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Marion

Yes and the aliens stay outside the curtains...not inside lol xx

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Being Me

Yes...everyone and everything stays outside!

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