Poem -
D. (Rose with no thorn)
Like yang without yin
Like heaven without hell
Like a childhood without tears
Like freedom without fears
Like gain without the pain
Like life without death
Like the sun without UV rays
Like traveling without delays
Like the world without a famine
Like a love story without an end
Like friendships without treason
Like loving beyond any reason
Like a smile without wrinkles
Like passion that never fades
Like warmth without burning
Like joy that keeps turning
Like reunions without goodbyes
You are, through my eyes
The first one ever born
A beautiful rose with no thorn
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Comments
excellent romantic poem, Dario, well chosen word pairings to create that amazingly romantic, yet conversational tone; very sincere and cool sounding, and the last two lines pulled this poetic feast together perfectly, 'like' repeats well, with Swiss watch precision, terrific poem, I really enjoyed poet, cheers
Thank you mate,
this is one of the best comments I ever got. I am sincerely grateful.
And I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Cheers!