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DADDY BY THE BEDSIDE

Looking in his baby girl's eyes...

Daddy tell me again that this isn't the end...

Tell me how I will see you again...

She reaches for her Daddy's hand as she looks in her Daddy's eyes...

He begins to tell her a story of a brave little girl who is loved more than she knows...

Tubes are her body's support...

Daddy will you hold me?

I have something I must say...

Her Daddy holds her and begins to slightly rock...

She began to tell him a story of a brave Daddy and the luckiest girl in the world...

You can lay me back down Daddy...

I love you Daddy and I am going home...

One final breath...

Daddy sits by the bedside...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Tony Taylor

Excellent write FEATHERS!!.....A powerfully compelling narrative that brings a tear .......and proudness at being a part of such a display of love and affection between Father and daughter!!...... you are SO friggin' unique in your style!!....... Love it!!........ALL STARS....... beautiful!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!.......T xo

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sparrowsong

Hello Tony...

I am so happy that it was a feeler...

The ability to touch a heart through words...

It's an awesome thing...

Thank you for your comment and support...

Hugz...

Feathers 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Sparrowsong  A sad write but so loving 
I felt every word it brought a tear to my eye
Great write my friend  hugs Debs 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

When I wrote this...

I had received a vision to my heart of a Dad next to his daughter...

In a hospital setting...

I don't know who they are, where they were or why I received it...

Thank you for your kind comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Larry Ran

Hi Sweet Sparrowsong,

Wow!  A real tearjerker.  The horrible pain of saying goodbye to a little soulmate.  The worst ordeal that a person can face.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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sparrowsong

Hello Soul Sis...

Did you feel as though you were in the room watching this?

Thank you for your heart touching comment...

Purple luv and hugs xo :) 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Larry...

We can lose a part of ourselves in many different ways...

When I think of those who have had it worst than us and they made it with less...

So many people struggling with things that may be extremely difficult and...

They know that when death is calling to them...

They tell Hell No!

Some people don't know that the Saints, Prophets, and our King are cheering them on...

Some people give in and give up...

Some people don't play the quitting game...

It's very difficult to fathom that a child has completed their purpose in life...

When all they want to do is live and be the best them they can be...

Those living can't wait to die...

People killing people...

People killing themselves...

They are lacking the desire of life...

That's the best they could be? 

Thank you for your sweet comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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