Poem -
Daddy's Little Girl A Collaborative work by Icarus Flocke and Greg Tucker
When I asked her
to
Teach me how to
feel,
She pulled out
a
Blade
And Cut Me;
In order
to best
illustrate
the
importance
of
Learning
The Hard Part
first..
with
love comparable
to a lonely
desert,
where life
feeds you sand
to quench your
thirst!!
Look up to the sky
rain will save you
A messiah to you
the antichrist to me
Smelling the
juice
She secreted
from below
Salvation
does not
Come
In secrets
Nature
Will always
Be
Truth's Messenger
Medicine Man
cried
From the
West
the belly
Of the beast
Has been
Spawned
Manna
was replaced
by
Fly infested Swine
Lucifer screams
for his
prodigal child
to Arise.............................
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Comments
Wow!!... you guys did an awesome job here...... taking the title to the extreme and getting there with some stellar phrasing that blends your two pens VERY well!! ...I particularly love the closing lines ~
~ "Manna was replaced
By
Fly infested swine
Lucifer screams
For his
Prodigal child
To arise....
It's amazing what two creative minds can create when put to the test!!.......Smokin' Grooves dudes!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?❤
Thank you Tony. I purposely used the metaphor of her juice and replacing manna which was given by God to his chosen people with fly infested swine ( which is not Kosher) to show what depravity Man has gone to. Hope you got it
Oh this is marvelous. Love the descriptive nature of the write and the emotion instilled through it. Cannot tell there are two different writers either. The words flow seamlessly. Nicely done.
Blessings to both of you.
Rebecca
thank you for your heart felt comment
Jeremy is an astounding writer. I love his imagery. I was so honored that he invited me to throw my ink on his already profound work.