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Daddy's Little Girl A Collaborative work by Icarus Flocke and Greg Tucker

Daddy's Little Girl   A Collaborative work by Icarus Flocke and Greg Tucker

When I asked her
to
Teach me how to
feel,
She pulled out
a
Blade
And Cut Me;
In order
to best
illustrate
the
importance
of
Learning
The Hard Part
first..
with  
love comparable
to a lonely
desert,
where life
feeds you sand
to quench your
thirst!!

Look up to the sky
rain will save you
A messiah to you
the antichrist to me

Smelling the
juice
She secreted
from below 

Salvation 
does not
Come
In secrets

Nature
Will always 
Be 
Truth's Messenger

Medicine Man
cried 
From the
West

the belly
Of the beast
Has been
Spawned

Manna
was replaced
by
Fly infested Swine

Lucifer screams
for his
prodigal child
to Arise.............................

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Greg and Jeremy!  This is so well do and cohesive for a co-write!  I am impressed...Great imagery...I don't think I would want this kind of love to teach me a lesson in if life...lol....Satan's spawn seems pretty scary...I think I have seen this in society already..lol  Great work...Such original phrases...Great collaborative piece! xo ;)

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GREG TUCKER

Thank.you Cherie! Jeremy is so great to work with. He is a brilliant writer, I am just a student trying to get extra credit on this one

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Tony Taylor

Wow!!... you guys did an awesome job here...... taking the title to the extreme and getting there with some stellar phrasing that blends your two pens VERY well!! ...I particularly love the closing lines ~

                                 ~ "Manna was replaced
                                     By 
                                    Fly infested swine

                                    Lucifer screams
                                    For his
                                    Prodigal child
                                    To arise....

It's amazing what two creative minds can create when put to the test!!.......Smokin' Grooves dudes!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo 🐧❤

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GREG TUCKER

Thank you Tony.  I purposely used the metaphor of her juice and replacing manna which was given by God to his chosen people with fly infested swine ( which is not Kosher) to show what depravity Man has gone to.  Hope you got it

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RRG (Rebecca)

Oh this is marvelous. Love the descriptive nature of the write and the emotion instilled through it. Cannot tell there are two different writers either. The words flow seamlessly. Nicely done. 
Blessings to both of you. 

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GREG TUCKER

Rebecca 
thank you for your heart felt comment
Jeremy is an astounding writer.  I love his imagery.  I was so honored that he invited me to throw my ink on his already profound work.

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Icarus Flocke

Greg. We're equals of different proportions
man, and your contribution to this made it what
It is, or may be brother.

We'll have to collaborate on some more later on

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