Dance of Life
Part 1.
Luma to the stage, you are on in 5.
I make my way to the wing
Ready to dance
Ready to preform
my nervousness getting to me
I need to please
I need to be prefect
ready? who knows
3, 2, 1, here we go
1, 2 ,3, 1, 2, 3,
flowing beautifully
praying not to do one wrong step
spinning to the tune
the song of this life
the crowd lifelessÂ
not caring
it's getting faster as a grow
getting more intense
trying to please everyoneÂ
trying to be beautiful
getting ready for my best part
trying to calm down
three, two, on-
*crack*
the crowd roars with laughterÂ
I fell..
down to nothing
my nervs getting worse
I look to the crowd
as they laugh
my face a mess
tears staining my face
but as I look
I see them,
my friends,
family, as they dance beside me
they look to me with love
kindness
hope
sympathyÂ
I get back upÂ
thinking,
why do I please them?
why do I try to do something I hate?
why for them?
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Comments
Hi love....a beautiful write đ¤
Thank you so much! This is my first time writing poems so thank you!
You have out done yourself Luma! I'd knew you would post one day. This was an amazing write.Â
Thank you Fish! I just felt like today's the day I post, so I did!
Welcome to the Cosmo Luma~
Hi Luma! Great first post for Cosmo! Welcome!!
If only life could be rehearsed! But it's not. We have to jyst carry on no matter what. And when you think of it, we need to fall sometimes in order for us to rise. Great thought provoking poem x
Thank you so much! Honestly if it was though, ten times better, heh but thank you!
Hello LUMA,
A VERY compelling poetic narrative......you have done a fine job of delivering the imagery with some beautifully crafted phrasing here......and I agree with BEING ME ~ It's a great debut piece!!......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister...and....WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thank you! I'm not very good at poems but I try my best! Thank you for the support it's very appreciated! xo-Luma
Very good question. No one should if not for money/fame etc. First time for me to read a poem about dance - nice.
Yes it is, I guess people do it because people told them? or they feel they must? who knows! but thank you!Â
Reminds me of a stage appearance in a kindergarten play where I literally messed up and everybody loved me anyway. Again, a vivid description đ
Heh that happened to me as well! I mean like I just started wandering off stage but still kinda the same thing! But thank you so much! - Luma xo
So sad and pretty! <3 Why force yourself to do something you don't even love? Many people struggle with this and to those, a message:
Be yourself always! You are enough! <3
Thank you so much! I totally agree with that! Thank you again! - Luma xo