Poem - 04 September 2016, 11:39 Dance Your Sorrow's Away Eileen Ortega Dance your sorrows away Dancing soothes the soul When you dance you shine... Shine on baby show the world how great life really is ~Eileen Ortega~ May 28, 2015 Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 529 Rating: Total votes: 0 Tags: Dance Dancing Happiness Life Living Poetry Genre: Narrative Topic: Happiness Listed in: Contest Entries 5 comments
Richard Waters04 September 2016, 12:07 Welcome to Cosmofunnel ! You have submitted fine writes on your first day contributing to this site. Love the sentiment of this piece. Best wishes to you !  :) Reply
Eileen Ortega05 September 2016, 08:02 Thank you kindly, I really appreciate that and can't wait to share some more with everyone on here. ~Eileen O~ Reply
Christopher Correia04 September 2016, 20:00 Eileen, love the vibrant tone and the message as well, good construction....the write leaves the reader with a really good feeling, cheers and welcome Reply
Eileen Ortega05 September 2016, 08:03 Thank you. When I wrote this I wanted the reader to feel as good as I was feeling that day myself. Glad you enjoyed it. ~Eileen O~ Reply
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Welcome to Cosmofunnel !
You have submitted fine writes on your first day contributing to this site.
Love the sentiment of this piece.
Best wishes to you ! Â :)
Thank you kindly, I really appreciate that and can't wait to share some more with everyone on here.
~Eileen O~
:) Take care.
Eileen, love the vibrant tone and the message as well, good construction....the write leaves the reader with a really good feeling, cheers and welcome
Thank you. When I wrote this I wanted the reader to feel as good as I was feeling that day myself. Glad you enjoyed it.
~Eileen O~