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DANCEING NAKED IN THE RAIN WITH YELLOW UMBRELLA

Sitting here watching the rain come down
I can hear train going by and THEN!!
Out of know where I see girl
Dancing naked in the rain with yellow umbrella
sing la la la la la la da da da da la la la and
she see me and runs to my door and says come out and play
SO!! I went out and now I am dancing naked in the rain with
The girl with yellow umbrella now we are both sing la la la la
da da la la la da da and the rain stops and rainbow comes out
And now we are sing and dancing naked under the rainbow
with the yellow umbrella and down the street we dance intill
sunset dancing naked in the rain with girl with yellow umbrella
sing LA LA LA LA DA DA LA LA LA DA

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Cherie Leigh

Lol...Well, this certainly feels free and uninhibited!  Maybe we all should be more relaxed and open to moments that take us by surprise!  I think it is so cool that you were inspired by my poem and just went with what you saw.  You made your own narrative poem.  I like the  yellow umbrella....because yellow is a bold color and it seems befitting for a naked girl to be holding a yellow umbrella that could represent her bold action...to not care what anyone thinks but to dance naked in the rain and sing..."La, la, la la...." Made me smile. Thanks for sharing.  Isn't it cool how we can be inspired and then create a write out of nowhere!  Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed. xo ;)

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Greg Etsell

thank you Cherie this poem didn't come out like I would like to and
its not as good as yours I will have to do thank you for reading

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Tony Taylor

Hey GREG!!!..... This was such a fun read...... It felt like a Beatles song with a couple of people who high or something and just feeling so free they had to 'Dance Naked In The Rain.....'......TRULY enjoyable dear poet brother!!.......ALL STARS!!...... big smiles.......T xo 🐧✴❤✴🐧

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Greg Etsell

Thank Tony after  Reading  Cherie poem about danceing naked this poem came to mined     It was fun write didn’t come out like I want and not as good as Cherie but it will do thanks for reading 

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John Astley

Lovely,  I  hope that weather comes my way!
I  liked this it cheered me up

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Greg Etsell

thank you John I hope you get some rain soon rain is good
 

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Barry Childs

What a lovely little poem, Greg. You do come out with some masterful creations. Great fun and solid poetry.  Barry x

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