Dark dark

Down a dark dark lane
in the dark dark of night
Is a dark dark house
its a dark dark sight
Down the dark dark path
to a dark dark door
i can hear a creaking from the dark dark floor
Through the dark dark door
to a dark dark room
A shadow slowly moves in the dark dark gloom
To the dark dark hall
Up the dark dark stairs
Theres a creaking and a knockingĀ
from a dark dark chair
Is there anybody here in this dark dark room
I hear a stifled moan from the dark dark gloom
Its a dark dark man, in a dark dark hat
he has a dark dark coat and a dark cravat
He looks through me with his dark dark eyes
Like he can read all of my dark dark lies
I turn and run past the dark dark chair
into the dark dark hall, down the dark dark stairs
Through the dark dark door, to the dark dark lane
into the dark dark night
I'll not go there again
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This was a nice read, especially the ending, it had a nice comedic last line which brought a nice layer to this for me, very well done.. It flowed smoothly while reading... This could turn into a nice series, regarding the dark man in the bedroom, looking through you... Take good care:
Thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed it.
Take careĀ
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Hello Julie...
Would you visit with a candle?
Would you visit with a light?
Be a great place to bring some friends on a moonless Hallowed night...
Great write!Ā
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongĀ
Thankyou sparrowsong
and loving your little ditty x
Take care now x