Poem -

Dark dark

Dark dark

Down a dark dark lane

in the dark dark of night

Is a dark dark house

its a dark dark sight

Down the dark dark path

to a dark dark door

i can hear a creaking from the dark dark floor

Through the dark dark door

to a dark dark room

A shadow slowly moves in the dark dark gloom

To the dark dark hall

Up the dark dark stairs

Theres a creaking and a knocking 

from a dark dark chair

Is there anybody here in this dark dark room

I hear a stifled moan from the dark dark gloom

Its a dark dark man, in a dark dark hat

he has a dark dark coat and a dark cravat

He looks through me with his dark dark eyes

Like he can read all of my dark dark lies

I turn and run past the dark dark chair

into the dark dark hall, down the dark dark stairs

Through the dark dark door, to the dark dark lane

into the dark dark night

I'll not go there again

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tempemendivil

This was a nice read, especially the ending, it had a nice comedic last line which brought a nice layer to this for me, very well done.. It flowed smoothly while reading... This could turn into a nice series, regarding the dark man in the bedroom, looking through you... Take good care:

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Julie Lucas

Thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed it.

Take care 

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sparrowsong

Hello Julie...

Would you visit with a candle?

Would you visit with a light?

Be a great place to bring some friends on a moonless Hallowed night...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Julie Lucas

Thankyou sparrowsong

and loving your little ditty x

Take care now x

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