Poem -
Dark End
Cruor stained handle and grip,
Betwixt ichor of cadaver and clip.
In murk and shadows skulk away,
Sanguinary, commit affray.
Slumped defunct in sombre,
Sirens not much longer.
Outline etched, sequestered,
Morbid of misery festered.
Succumbed to covetous tendencies,
Serial of occurrences.
Relinquish morality,
Victim of blow and savagery.
Gendarmerie on scene,
Inspect, respect, obscene.
Lifeless midst surreal of motive,
Null of revere sustained of emotive.
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Comments
Shivering write Simon!
Every Single Word was perfect!
Super intricately written! Like instead of just saying holding the bloodstained knife you said cruor stained handle and grip! That was just an example.
I'm so super blown away lol
Thank you Mitsali so much.Β Just fancied something different glad you enjoyed.
Dude!!.....I don't often say this ......but I made a couple of trips to the Thesaurus while ingesting this piece of poetic Sherlockery!!....smiles.....well maybe that's pushing a little too far...... but nonetheless.... quite unique in its appeal!!...... more smiles!!.......T xo π§β΄β€π
Lol thanks Tony was doing my daily read of the dictionary and brushing up my vocabulary glad you enjoyed.
wondrous ink my friend!
Aww thanks Lisa.
Wow Simon!! A very thrilling write.. like you dived deep inside a crime, so brilliantly written. Every word adds to the intensity, you've layered this so powerfully. I loved it!! ππ½π
Thanks SD! So missing your writes by the way gonna have a good read up shortly.
Awww you're so kind Simon! I think I'll post the new one today.. I go back and forth with it lol. Thank you so much for your support!π
Great news ill keep an eye out for it!Β