Poem -
Darkness Untitled
Don't let the darkness overcome your body
As it has devoured your soul
You lifeless heartless piece of death
It is time that you take back
All the evil you have committed
For everything you have built will come crashing down
As you pay for your blood cloaked calamities
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Comments
Hey CARLOS!!....... that FINAL line made this VERY special!!....... what I liked so much about this piece was the fact that it could interpreted SO MANY different ways....... except....... that final line drives home the heart of darkness running throughout its heartbeat......... succinctly powerful!!.........ALL STARS........ well done..........T xo
Hello Carlos...
Great write!
They will have the untimely experience...
One we will never have too...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
It was supposed to be ultimate experience...
Not untimely...
Oops!