Poem -
Dead Roses
I wish to send dead roses to my ex.....
For she used to make me feel happiness, now all she makes me feel is regret
I hope the decaying flowers remind her of how our love quickly soured
How her ice maidens touch poisoned our love.... Just like those decaying flowers
We parted ways to much happier days and I'm so happy she is gone...
So I ask the florist specifically, "send dead roses and leave the thorns on"Β
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LOL!!Β DUDE!! ~ what I LOVE about this write ......aside from its obvious comic appeal (totally made me smile hard)........ is that its succinct ....and has an added impact because of its VERY well chosen words...... you have an unusual gift......I need to go back and check out more of your stuff brother poet..... gotta give me time......I just find you 'Way Groovy' my friend!!.....FAT stars bro!!..... well done...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?ββ΄β₯β₯β₯β₯β₯????
Thanks for your your kind words Tony. Sorry for the late reply, I've got a lot on my plate at the moment. Take care - SydΒ
Digging the ending. Great write!Β
Thank you Tiffany. Glad you enjoyed. I like to leave a little punch line at the end on most of my poems - SydΒ
I very much understand the feelings in this piece Syd, going through the same thing myself....but in my case I feel a horses head more appropriate...not that I'm bitter.....much lol xxxxx
Sorry to hear you're going through the same thing Lucy. A horses head! Ha ha ha. Thanks for reading - Syd xox
Hell yes. Weβve all felt this way I bet. You just put it more eloquently. Thanks man!
Thanks Michael, I originally wrote this as a stanza for another poem but thought it could also be ok on its own as a short poem. Glad you enjoyed - SydΒ