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Deadly Love

Deadly Love

If to walk again you needed legs
From me you would not have to beg.
Id cut mine off and give them to you
Because i love you through and through.

If to feel again you needed to receive some hands
Because for me theres no one else on this land
Id cut mine off and give them to you
Because i love you through and through.

Now here lay i with no hands or feet
But with vibrant love my heart does beat
You need a kidney...id give that too
Because i love you through and through

No hands no feet one kidney have I
But still these eyes have not begun to cry
Your lung does fail and you begin to fear
But have no worries...my lung is here.

Two legs and two hands...one lung and one kidney
Im missing important parts...some inside of me
But still my heart does beat so strong
Because i have loved you all along

And then one day i hear the news
Of days to live you only have a few
Your heart is faulty...its not acting right
The look on your face...burns across my sight.

I take a deep breath...and look in your eyes
I bite my lip...so as not to cry,
I grab your hand and squeeze it tight
I tell you...my darling...sleep well tonight.

You find me lifeless on the morrow
My heart in you fills with sorrow
They took my life to give to you
Because i love you through and through.

~UnlimitedThinker

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Dean Kuch

Hey, Mike. Welcome to Cosmo.
Dr. Victor Frankenstein has got nothing on you, bro!
That's one way to keep love alive, I suppose.
Interesting poem...
~Dean Kuch
♣~?~♠

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Brotherslim

My goosebumps say it all, thank you for sharing this. 

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Cappblanks

Ah, say the one you love needed people killed and countries destroyed. Would you comply?

I cant help but think of the endless torture you would bring to yourself or others, because your love is through and through.

endless thinking.

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Cappblanks

If you would sacrifice your self with the means you have available, how far will you go?

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Cappblanks

Your poem is submitting to a level of despair, so far from love its inhumane.

detailed and well worded, but, very disturbing.

possibly I'm the only one who sees past the veil of love and into the mind of a desperate man.

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