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Valerie Lynn

I can honestly say you just made my night. Thank you for your comment!! ♥

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Good write, my applause, my vote

Draw me in closer as I sink deeper
And deeper…
Drifting in a fog
Until I finally wake up
To the emptiness
That is and always will be

Regards & Love

WILLY

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Valerie Lynn

Yay!! I am so happy you like this one!! Thank you Williamsji!!

With Love,

YLS Val ♥

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Delmayne Seekoei

hey Val ...wow I must admit this poem described very dark the dark ones get my vote .....mayne...

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Valerie Lynn

Heyyy Mayne!! Thank you so much for reading! Your comment is awesome and makes me want to write even darker ones hehe! I appreciate your support more than you know!!

Val ♥

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norman hardwich

This is very emotional stuff girl :-) wow thought I was deep and emotional as an artist but poets all alike are very very deep and quite serious about their art I am fascinated by this and love reading :-) great poem Val very sad but cool :-)lots of love from me and a hug :-)

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Valerie Lynn

Aww you are deep and emotional!! I love your work Norman!! Thank you for such a lovely comment and for making my day!! Love and hugs to you too!!

Val ♥

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LiamoAlive

Wow I really get your poetry

The beautiful pain of living

Not having a destination

Or clear reason for existence

Wandering aimlessly in a strange purgatory

Thus from these springs if  does the poet find meaning

Within the core of feeling itself

You made me feel this thanks it's awesome to meet you my beautiful poetess

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Valerie Lynn

You just inspired me to want to write more!! Thank you for your amazing comment. I cannot believe I made you feel that way through one of my poems...I think that is the greatest compliment I could ever receive! Thank you so much and it is nice to meet you as well Liamo!!

Val ♥

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Surabhi Saxena

Amazingly written. .A deep thought that touched the heart. . You have created a different impact of poetry. . Keep it up sweetheart. . :) :*
Love always
Surabhi

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Surabhi! I don't know how I didn't see this message! I'm sorry I'm responding so late!! Thank you for your comment gorgeous! I miss seeing you on here!! :(  I hope you are well!!

With Love,

Val ♥️

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Gabriel Magno

A dark, disturbing, painful episode of what many experience in life. Well written and impacting...

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Valerie Lynn

What an awesome comment Gabe!! I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my writing! It means so much to me!! Thank you!!

With Love,

Val ♥️

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