Poem -
DEAFENING CRESCENDO
The show is over and I am left alone,
still basking in the Philharmonic orchestra of Beethoven's ' Thunderstorm ',
but no one hears, no one dances with me,
no one wants to know why and how the music sounds like a megaphone ?
He is my eternal companion,
but looks like a tank battalion.
Why the heck! it's a non stop music
in my phantasmagorical dream playing acoustic.
He watches me like a hawk,
I get his messages even if he can't talk.
This maddening relentless note gets louder and louder,
If I writhe, it even becomes harder and harder.
So, I free myself from whining,
wean me from this " white noise " in my right ear and just keep smiling!
I'm used to it now!!
LEAH CABAEL YODICO
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Hey LEAH!!..... this gave me a sense of aloneness .......a cry through a dream....... where the music overwhelmed the senses and brought a strange sense of metaphysical into play.....VERY enigmatic write...... with some outstanding phrasing ........compelling stuff my friend......fistful-O-stars!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Hi Tony. You always amuse me with your outstanding and inspiring comments ##she is alone but she hears compelling sounds that others can't hear ## I have been experiencing this blurring sound in my right ear for 5 years now ## I noticed that it becomes intense when I'm lonely. ##so. I decided to live with it!!
Thanks again for dropping by
Hugs and kisses
Leah
Hello Leah...
I can't help to think that what you have been experiencing is God is reminding you that...
You are not alone...
It's the way He knows you can hear...
That's Awesome!
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs and Smiles!
sparrowsong
Thank you, yes I know. God is always with me all the time ##
Hugs and kisses
Leah
Hi Leah A very interesting piece I cant help but think
that being alone intensifies the sounds that are heard
And really are not wanted, a nuisance of sorts
your last lines give a sense of not letting them
take over learning to live with them
An original piece, written superbly
Best wishes Debs xx
Thank you Deborah, I've been having this Tinnitus for 5 years. It intensifies when I'm alone and under pressure or depressed. ## one doesn't have to live with it. #
Thanks for dropping by
Hugs and kisses
Leah
My Dear Leah,
.
The music of her heart and soul, has crescendo deafening
Yet no one hears it quite like she, in her ears it ever rings
She tries at times to eschew it's notes, but on and on they peal
So she's resigned herself to their neverend, not a bad fate to now have sealed
.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
You're feedback is always inspiring and you bring justice to the ink!! Thank you Larry!!
XOXO Leah