DEAR MOM,
We might be...
He text me today mom, heās funny but weāre just friends,
We went out today mom, heās so kind and so dorky, but weāre still just friends
We spent the night together mom, he was so careful and so gentle, we might be more than friends now.
I met his family today mom, they were so lovely and I was so nervous, weāre definitely more than friends now.
We went out tonight mom, heās a bit flirty with other girls but itās okay because I know he loves me.
He finally said he loves me today mom, Iāve never been so happy I know heās the one.
We had our first fight today mom, he said some nasty things but itās okay because we all say nasty things when weāre mad,
We made up today mom, he sent me a beautiful message saying how much he loves me.
Itās been a year now mom, he invited me to live with him, weāve been fighting a lot but itās okay because weāre just stressed.
We lost our baby today mom, we were supposed to be 13 weeks, he seemed relieved but he still comforted me.
Heās been so distant lately mom, he forgot Valentineās Day, is he falling out of love with me?
We fought again today mom, itās all we ever seem to do but I still love him .
He said he doesnāt love me today mom, he wants us to go our separate ways but he said itās okay because heās not interested in anyone else and he still loves me, he just needs time.
Heās had time mom, I think heās been seeing other girls but I still love him,
Heās been saying nasty things about me to people mom but I think I still love him him.
He doesnāt love me anymore mom, now I know and I canāt help but thinking that we should never have been more than friends...
I donāt love him anymore mom and we should definitely have never been more than friends.
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I like the naive repetiveness in this. It makes you just know that something bad is going to happen. And that makes you want to read on. Excellent poem x
Yes, Yes, Yes!
BRAVO.Ā
I read two of your poems and gave you advice to expand on your writing to,Ā dig deeper into your writing. I'm so happy I came to read this poem because, you know how to dig as deep as any creative writer.Ā
When I read the following lines, I cried.Ā
Sigh. That must have been the hardest experience of your life to survive. You sure are a strong woman who is also very talented. This is a poem that is hard to read but worth reading. When a poem can make you laugh, cry or get angry, it's good literature. While it's sad about the relationship and even sadder about your baby, it seems as though you have reached a higher plain of existence -- for you, maybe for once.
Love yourself -- because, when other's fail and they will, you'll still have the confidence and ability to over come. Which is what you have shown in this poem. I'm so impressed. Maybe you have a creative nonfiction essay or memoir in your future. Dream a little -- you have a bright future.Ā
I'm sure your child is in heaven and is now your guardian angel. That is my belief, right or wrong. I'm so happy to have found your poem.Ā
Wow.Ā
You are so sweet, thank you so much for all your advice and all your compliments, I always welcome creative criticism, I love to write and itās always good to get someone elseās view on a piece ā„ļø
Thank you for your kind words, unfortunately it is a completely true story, I am now healing in my own time āŗļø
So happy I found your poem again!Ā