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DEAR MOM,

We might be...

He text me today mom, he’s funny but we’re just friends,

We went out today mom, he’s so kind and so dorky, but we’re still just friends
We spent the night together mom, he was so careful and so gentle, we might be more than friends now.

I met his family today mom, they were so lovely and I was so nervous, we’re definitely more than friends now.

We went out tonight mom, he’s a bit flirty with other girls but it’s okay because I know he loves me.
He finally said he loves me today mom, I’ve never been so happy I know he’s the one.

We had our first fight today mom, he said some nasty things but it’s okay because we all say nasty things when we’re mad,
We made up today mom, he sent me a beautiful message saying how much he loves me.

It’s been a year now mom, he invited me to live with him, we’ve been fighting a lot but it’s okay because we’re just stressed.

We lost our baby today mom, we were supposed to be 13 weeks, he seemed relieved but he still comforted me.
He’s been so distant lately mom, he forgot Valentine’s Day, is he falling out of love with me?

We fought again today mom, it’s all we ever seem to do but I still love him .

He said he doesn’t love me today mom, he wants us to go our separate ways but he said it’s okay because he’s not interested in anyone else and he still loves me, he just needs time.
He’s had time mom, I think he’s been seeing other girls but I still love him,
He’s been saying nasty things about me to people mom but I think I still love him him.

He doesn’t love me anymore mom, now I know and I can’t help but thinking that we should never have been more than friends...
I don’t love him anymore mom and we should definitely have never been more than friends.

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Being Me

I like the naive repetiveness in this. It makes you just know that something bad is going to happen. And that makes you want to read on. Excellent poem x

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Katina Woodruff...

Yes, Yes, Yes!
BRAVO.Ā 

I read two of your poems and gave you advice to expand on your writing to,Ā  dig deeper into your writing. I'm so happy I came to read this poem because, you know how to dig as deep as any creative writer.Ā 

When I read the following lines, I cried.Ā 

We lost our baby today mom, we were supposed to be 13 weeks, he seemed relieved but he still comforted me.

Sigh. That must have been the hardest experience of your life to survive. You sure are a strong woman who is also very talented. This is a poem that is hard to read but worth reading. When a poem can make you laugh, cry or get angry, it's good literature. While it's sad about the relationship and even sadder about your baby, it seems as though you have reached a higher plain of existence -- for you, maybe for once.

Love yourself -- because, when other's fail and they will, you'll still have the confidence and ability to over come. Which is what you have shown in this poem. I'm so impressed. Maybe you have a creative nonfiction essay or memoir in your future. Dream a little -- you have a bright future.Ā 

I'm sure your child is in heaven and is now your guardian angel. That is my belief, right or wrong. I'm so happy to have found your poem.Ā 

Wow.Ā 

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Alex Daisley

You are so sweet, thank you so much for all your advice and all your compliments, I always welcome creative criticism, I love to write and it’s always good to get someone else’s view on a piece ā™„ļø

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Alex Daisley

Thank you for your kind words, unfortunately it is a completely true story, I am now healing in my own time ā˜ŗļø

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