Death Death Evil Evil Poem
(For the friend who asked me to try dark poetry......just remember you asked for this)
Die Die bitch
You think you know me?
please
you can't possibly understand the pain I feel!
So Die Die Die Goes the knife that I plunge into your tiny pathetic heart
blood splatters across myfingertips and I lick them
so sweet
addicting
Die Die Die Bitch you try to reach my soul but you can't
Because it's not there
I cut it out
Piece
by
mother fucking piece
and now it's empty
you thought you could fill that void?
well you can't because it's endless and black
oh so black and bottomless
these tears that fall down my face
ARE NOT FOR YOU!!!
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
the insanity inside me, it envalopes me and makes me so so cold
the darknes the darkness
It's so beautiful
unlike me.
whisper whisper I rot away
everyone forgets me this day.
(does not actually feel this way about myself, or anyone else, this was written simply to prove I could do it.)
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Well done! you did it...writing a poem dark and evil for me requires a punch....for me a knockout x
This reminds me of Metallica's die die my darling. Well done!
Even though it wasn't me who made the request for you to write a dark poem...I must say I love this one! I LOVE DARK poetry. I think you should write another! A vote from me! Nice write! Keep them coming!
Val <3
The friend I wrote this for was worried it was about her,I want to point out its not about anyone in particular,but I know lots of people who know the feeling of being misunderstood
Also if you are getting this bent out of shape over som1 u are with getting something wrong,please seek help
I was not getting bent out of shape about anything what are you talking about? I was simply saying I really liked your poem. Maybe you took what I said the wrong way but I am sorry if that happened. I was just saying I like dark poetry and I liked the poem you wrote. I don't know how you could have possibly thought I was saying anything bad about it.
Okay now that Tim explained to me what he meant by the comment above mine I wanted to say sorry for my response. I took it completely the wrong way so please disregard what I wrote above. Sorry everyone!
Val <3