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Jason Luke

I love you so much Val! I couldn't imagine my life without you. I will always be there for you through both sickness and health. Hopefully health will be here for you soon.

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you my little love bug! I love you so much and I am ever so grateful to have you in my life! You and your loving support is what keeps me going throughout my day. You cheer me up when I am down and you are always there for me with both physical and emotional support. Your sweet pea loves you more than you will ever know!!!

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BLOSSOM

Val to find someone in life who would go to the ends of the earth and back again for you; and only wanting in return is 'you' is truly the best feeling ever!  You are a lovely, warm hearted lady, with such a beautiful smile, he is one lucky fella!  Wish you well for your future health and happiness and keep your chin up hun! A vote from me:)

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Valerie Lynn

Rachel - Your message was so very sweet and loving. It brought tears to my eyes! I truly appreciate your message especially coming from such a talented writer as yourself!  Thank you so much for such a heartfelt comment. Thank you for making me smile and thank you so much for the vote! I love it!

Val <3

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Valerie Lynn,

The most beautiful words ever written by this great Poetess, Excellent verse from her own life experience, Good work. Thanks for sharing. 

There is no place I would rather be

Than in your loving arms

Where you protect me from harm

With all the shit we have been through

I know you are the one I can turn to

Trust is something I am not used to

From the bottom of my heart I thank you

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

WILLIAMSJI - Your comment to me was beautiful and also brought tears to my eyes! The verse you quoted made me realize how blessed I truly am to have such a wonderful man in my life who supports me through the difficult times!

Much Love!

Val <3

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

My applause on your winning nomination

Regards, Prayers

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

WILLIAMSJI - Thank you for congratulating me on the nomination!

Thank you to the one who nominated this poem! I am truly grateful for this nomination!

With Love,

Val <3

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Susan! You left me such a sweet comment and I cannot thank you enough! You are an amazing writer and you have been such an inspiration to me!

Val <3

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Valerie Lynn,

Be strong, Be realistic, Be optimistic, We are with you with the support of God, the Almighty,

Standing with prayers for your speedy recovery, 

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

Hi WILLIAMSJI! Your comment was very touching! Thank you for the support you have given me and thank you so much for your prayers! Your message means more to me than you will ever know!

Val <3

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Caitlin Lawyer

beautiful Val, a great poem from an even greater woman, amazing.

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Valerie Lynn

Caitlin - You are such a sweetheart! Thank you for reading! Your comment made me smile :)

Much Love! 

Val ♥

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Jason Luke

Baby I just have to say one more thing...

You in that pink top. My favorite picture of you!

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Valerie Lynn

Ha I just saw this one. You asked me to use that pic that's how I know you love it! Thank you baby. You make me feel so loved :)

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Surabhi Saxena

It is really Beautiful ..you have a perfect love for your partner..:)

Loved it..!

Keep Writing
Love
Surabhi

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Valerie Lynn

Surabhi - Thank you sweetie for reading! Your comment was so very sweet and I loved it!

Love Always,

Val ♥

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Jimmy Arnold

Wow, is what i must say about this poem Valerie,

First and foremost,(Jason) you are a very,(iwill not say lucky) because you two were meant to find each other and i sure do take my hat off to you and more, for i find you to be just as strong and in love with my friend Valerie as she is of you and ask only for you to keep that fire burning. If courage, determination and honesty had a face, it would be that of Valerie Lynn.This poem speaks volumes of what she truly feel from the depths of her heart for you and some people live a life time, never to reach the magnitude of love nor care, that she has displayed and thus recited in this poem,(not only), to you but to us for you and the eloquence in which she has delivered it reminds you of a message in the bottle that is found and happens only once in a lifetime,(if then) if one is lucky to be its discoverer.You sir have discovered your message in the bottle and she hers, in you, never to be left sealed. I wish you both well and my friend Valerie, you will always be in my prayers and as Luke has conveyed, your blessing is right around the corner and that corner is getting shorter and in your favor as we speak..This was a true love story, told in a poem...This is a beautiful poem and i don't say beautiful that often but this one transcends the word and beyond....

Take Care My Friend,

Jim  

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Valerie Lynn

Jim - I cannot even begin to describe how much your comment means to me. Thank you for your kind words to both Jason and I. I also do believe it takes a very strong man to remain by someone's side when they are suffering and all they can do is watch. He has been my savior and I truly do believe that God put him in my life at the very right time. I believe that because I was ready to end it all and I felt so alone even though I knew I was never alone. I just felt that way all the time. I am serious when I say that your comments cheer me up. When I read them they give me more hope and feel like I really can go on and my life will eventually get better. I love your reference to the message in a bottle. Your words are so very endearing and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for being such an amazing and supportive friend.

Val <3

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Below, I quote your greatest writings from heart, dear Valerie

You make me feel as if I have a purpose in this life

I cannot imagine being without you by my side

Be brave, faithful, God is great,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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