DEITY
To EVERYONE, there's a deity
That's neither strange nor odd
To some it's money or power
To others, omnipotent God
If you were to notice,
Through long contemplation
And varied statistics
You'd find that power, money, and God
Share some of the same characteristics
If certain ramifications
Are taken into consideration
And certain obligations are implied
Then is it not expected?
For one's thoughts to be respected
And one's rights to be protected
From the lies.......
Now, it may be going, a bit too far
But I think it should be said
One can't PROVE God is living
One can't PROVE God is dead.....
Is man a fabrication
Of Gods imagination
Or is God a fabrication
Of Man............?
food for thought, ...Tony Taylor, Isaac Marion Hood IIIĀ (Chicago)
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Some exellent questions there T, I only wish I could answer them all for you sweety. I loved the piece and I love the way you think poetically. Love you G xx
Thank you G, but Isaac had his hand that piece, can't take the credit, by the way he says to tell you Hello, hopes to speak to you someday...........i'll tell him you liked the piece.....T xx
Hi Brother Tony,
Very thought provoking verse, My love, My vote
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Mr. Mavelli........much appreciated sir.....tony.......bless you..
Awesome write dearest Tony, it speeds up upon read, them bam the big question hits,
"Is man a fabrication
Of Gods imagination
Or is God a fabrication
Of Man............?"
love it, hugs n smile's nardine xoxo
You know what Nardine, my friend Isaac had a hand in this and he said that the ending was the right approach.....I disagreed,Ā .....he was right....i'll tell him....he'll like that, he doesn't really write much poetry maybe this will inspire him........thanks sweetie.....t xx
Concrete philosophy of a provident mind, very true no one can submit to the point answer of your question is kept before..."One can't PROVE God is living, One can't PROVE God is dead...",...fully supporting..practical handling ...love..xx Ravindra Kumar xx
Excellent comment Ravindra,Ā can always count on you to read it for what it's worth.....love to you brother....tony..xx