Devil In Disguise
Oh my, look at what I've done
This should be fun, should I run?
I got caught in action, you see
I can be naughty, I'm no angel, that is not me
I am more like,the devil in disguise
That woman you absolutely despise, I can see the hate in your eyes
Which truthfully, delivers me an inner sense of pride
I'm no angel, hell is what I will provide
To you, if you only hand it to me
I could be your worst nightmare, you see
All the knives, in my back served as the creation
To my dark sided nation
I'm no angel, yes I used to be
Before the liars, such as you destroyed the angel in me
(I usually do not do writes such as this one, but it was for a contest on another site. So I thought I would share with the cosmofunnel family
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Hi Poetic Heart,
Nice, my applause,
Regards
'WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Williams!
Hope you win...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thanks Sparrowsong, I did not win no, but it was enjoyable just the same :)
Hey Poetic Vascular System (kidding)...........I like this............maybe you don't like doing them.......but you've definitely got a knack for it..........I like the imagery of the knives in the back.........that turns your angel into a dark and sinister character.........one thing though.........she's just threatening here.......is there going to be a follow up where she chops someone up into pieces or something?...........It's good........I too wish you luck with the contest...........it's definitely ominous............Love and Rockets!!........T xo
Hey T man!! if you like this one your would like the one which posted three times which is The Devil's train (Do not know if you have read it)... But if not you definitely might want to give it a try. It is a mix of both heaven powers and hells nightmares. Now that you mention it maybe there will be a follow up too, because in the contest I had to follow a 100 word limit. Thank you T man! Glad you enjoyed the write friend xox
Glad I got to read this one, Melissa, this is awesome, and I'm not really a fan of writes that skid to the dark side, but it all depends on the write and the writer, love the attitude coming off this one, a dangerous swagger, fun and expressive....enjoyed, you rock this type of poetry, just saying
Thanks Chris, truth is I am not much or a person who enjoys writing about such topics either. But, lately I have been writing on another site as well which offers little contests, created by other poets n in this one I had to include the line "I'm no angel" in it so I figured the more unique the approach the funner it is for everyone involved. Thanks, it is true my biggest hits are mostly my poems about some sort of darkness. Those one's though I must say are over flowing with every sort of emotion, because it is those which usually state that I am about to have a emotional period where I actually feel strong enough to let the tears flow. That maybe happens like 5 times a year so, I should try to construct such poems more often and maybe it would only happen once a year :)