THE DEVIL'S IN THE DETAIL (sequel to The Devil's Work)

Spying through the window
Of his latest victim’s house
There she was, ‘a beauty’
Sat there eating with her spouse
Oh! How happy they did look
And, what misery he would cause
His pleasure overwhelmed him
In his mind; rapturous applause
He loved a spot of dinner
So he stayed to watch them eat
Standing from a distance
Too polite to take a seat!
Well, he hadn’t been invited
They didn’t know he did exist
‘Til the day he strolled into their life
A veil of deathly mist!
A character; beguiling
Lived a quiet, nasty life
Had no faith in any human
His religion was his knife
And this beast he was experienced
Had snooped around before
Taking life so many times
Scent of death; he did adore
This creature was no fool
His intelligence, supreme
To be successful in his crimes
He always had a theme
A trademark of his handy work
A signature of death
A kindly token he would leave
Upon their dying breath
His work was so important
And the details even more
It made his ‘craft’ superior
And never felt a chore
He looked on with great excitement
Saw the spouse go up the stairs
Just as he’d done every night
When he spied them unawares
The kitchen door left open
He’d noted this before
They liked to have a cigarette
Now he’d access their ground floor
Entering, oh so quietly
She never saw him there
He hovered for a while
Inhaled her perfume in the air
His success was in the planning
The spouse he liked an early night
Put his music in his ears
In the morning; what a fright!!
He devoured her aroma
Got tingles down his spine
Her body such a treasure
“Soon to be all mine!”
And with one foul swoop
Lunging to his pot of gold
He rammed the knife into her neck
A beauty to behold
The pain froze on her face
From the swiftness of her death
The blood it flowed all down his glove
As she struggled for her last breath
Her fear, it gave excitement
His body so erect
He revelled in her jewels
Took his fill; did not neglect
Any part of her young flesh
Or the details of his work
Precision it was everything
His job he did not shirk
Left a tiny daisy head
In the middle of her throat
Part of his murderous chain
In his genius, he would gloat!
Six daisies had he left
On all those bodies, oh so sweet!
Yet, more to join them in the link
Before it was complete
Revelling in the atmosphere
So pleased with all he’d done
Inhaled her beauty one last time
Oh! Work it was such fun!
His heart it filled with pride
Knowing that he’d never fail
As his Mentor always told him
The devil’s in the detail ......
Like 0 Pin it 4
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
so good at the dark stuff rachel & a better picture lol x
Thanks Tracy!! Ha ha, yep not quite as intimidating hey lol!! :)
not as sexy ya mean lolx
Ha ha ha!! Have to say I had a thing for that bloke lol!! :)
great write Rachel this list is getting bigger voted faved and nomed loved it x
Wow, thanks Susan, much appreciated! :)
great piece rachel you are good at the devils writes lol tina x
Cheers Tina, must be the devil in me lol!! Thanks for reading hun :)
wonderful really super rachel loved it so much
Thanks Paul! Was unsure with a poem how it would be taken doing a sequel ha ha!!! My poems can be more like stories and for some maybe too long lol, but I am glad you enjoyed!!! :)
wow yet again fab write this poem was so intense
from start to finish couldnt wait to get too end
brill!!!!loved this
Thanks Sandra, glad you enjoyed :)
Absolute CLASS Rachel, dare i say it even better than The Devils Work!!! which for me is the best poem/story i've read on this site x:)
Thanks Jason for your kind comments!! :)
Wonderfully dark and sinister. Excellent piece Rachel. :)
Thanks for reading Poppy :)
Thanks Michele really appreciate you reading and your lovely comment :)