Poem -
Diamond Eyes
Diamond eyes to rein the sky
I will take you away, with me
Once and for all
Time will see us realign
Diamond eyes to rain the sky
In tune with all our dreams
Watch me in all my powers
Tempt with hours of pleasure
Yet it's a strange day, the roses are in bloom
And in a strange way, we know somehow we're doomed
Diamond eyes to rein the sky
And in a strange place, when the sun goes down we move
In a strange phase, like we've got nothing left to lose
Diamonds eyes to rain the sky
Time will see us realignÂ
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Comments
Wow powerful piece Amber nice write I love this I love that you choose diamond eye to rein the sky as your subject and kept at it nice touch it is beautifully worded and a most definitely an eligent piece thank you fir sharing it trully does have nice meaning
I used rain and reign to add a different affect for the reader. Thanks DameonÂ
Well the effect worked with excellent words thanks also anytime I love supporting my fellow poets
We need all the support we can get. Someone once told me they would enjoy poetry more if they could understand it better. Which is why I chose a style that can accomadate readers with diverse backgrounds. I feel more of a story teller than a poet
World would be perfict if everyone wrote the same we need things to make us different from everyone else to make us stand out and shine from all the rest also I see u wrote porcelain angel 2 I can't wait to read it :D
Also added a picture of myself, because I just feel good today lol
Well you look good today to :D you look just beautiful in every way I wish you the best :D
Gee thanks friend much appreciatedÂ
Hope you enjoy it.
Hey Flower, thanks so much hugsÂ
“Diamond eyes to rein/rain the sky”
I like that.
Another potential lyric for a song.
Will check it again round the weekend.
Gianfranco, you're a dear, thank you