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Did It

Did It

I did it all for them,
                     when my bill-money filled their bellies
                                as "no problem" became my instant response
and midnight phone calls interrupted my cuddling...
I did it all for.......each of them.
                             Them...the ones who now don't return
my text...
         though I notice my words
                 have been read....
                                                 I get no response!
                                                           to my cries for help
at this very moment
               when I am hungry
and stranded
                                          and alone,
                                                                               crying:
I did it!!

                             ALL

for those..............bitches!

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Tony Taylor

Hey Nikkia!!.........very cool write...........I LOVE the way you experimented with a different formatting style..........very creative...........and definitely helped the read!..........sucks what the girls did to you!!.........whether it's true or not.........it was a compelling write..........well done girlfriend!!..........smiles.........T  xx

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Sheryl Stewart_1

Awesome Nikki! So creative and with such ease! No worries...Your seeds have been planted in good soil...get ready for your harvest!

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Beth Landheart

The end word is the punch, seals the deal to a very emotional and telling piece. I am VERY sure that you love your friends and that you hurt because they haven't reciprocated the same love back to you. But! I agree with Keondra, "it's coming back to you." Smart write. Love the formatting. True art, Nikki! :)

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Nikki Roberts

Tony, Keondra, Sheryl, Beth: THANK YOU! Your feedback is kind and motivating. :)

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