Did It

I did it all for them,
when my bill-money filled their bellies
as "no problem" became my instant response
and midnight phone calls interrupted my cuddling...
I did it all for.......each of them.
Them...the ones who now don't return
my text...
though I notice my words
have been read....
I get no response!
to my cries for help
at this very moment
when I am hungry
and stranded
and alone,
crying:
I did it!!
ALL
for those..............bitches!
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Hey Nikkia!!.........very cool write...........I LOVE the way you experimented with a different formatting style..........very creative...........and definitely helped the read!..........sucks what the girls did to you!!.........whether it's true or not.........it was a compelling write..........well done girlfriend!!..........smiles.........T xx
Awesome Nikki! So creative and with such ease! No worries...Your seeds have been planted in good soil...get ready for your harvest!
The end word is the punch, seals the deal to a very emotional and telling piece. I am VERY sure that you love your friends and that you hurt because they haven't reciprocated the same love back to you. But! I agree with Keondra, "it's coming back to you." Smart write. Love the formatting. True art, Nikki! :)
Tony, Keondra, Sheryl, Beth: THANK YOU! Your feedback is kind and motivating. :)