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Did You Notice

Do you notice?
All is an opaque gem
All of it made me numb
My eyes longing for a look
My hands trembling to caress
My body bent like a sheppard’s crook
My mind seems to obsess
The tear streaked face quaking
The shudder in my shoulders seems to drag on
The heart breaking
The world gone
All that I am
All that I can become
Did you notice?

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Michael Walston

I love how you connect the emotional with the physical in great description!

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DragonLady 24

Thank you.

These ones are hard to write. But, when you need to put it down.......

Well, you know

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