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Being Me

This is a big change of style Shaun!  This is short  and right to the point...which is sharp. It's definitely made me think as I read it. And I've already read it 5 times...lol x

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Jim "The Lad" ....

a truism I had to pin so to remember to give to my grand kids
! your wisdom shines through Shaun!................................Jim

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Shaun Cronick

Jim thank you so much and I value your kind comments sir.
And your kindness and astute wisdom never sparkles, but shines and shines brightly.

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Shaun Cronick

Tina thank you, thank you and thank you and thank you so much and you get it and see it for what it stands for. 
Short and to the point and after writing it I googled it to make sure anybody else had and thankfully was not the case.
And I'll share a secret with you, my daughter loved the self-encapsulation simplicity of it and great minds Tina ..
Thanks for all you generously do on here for so many and when's your next book due and good luck with it. 👌❤️.

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The fish of the sea

Powerful here Shaun, q thought provoking read likely yo stay with me throughout the day! Peace and smiles to you my friend. Hope you are doing well~

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Shaun Cronick

Max good to hear from you and thank you and don't dwell on it too much just chill and enjoy all the good things that life can kindly offer .
And peace and smiles also to you my friend and I'm doing ok after my second jab and hope all is good with you .
Hang in there Max and all the best my friend
 

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Gwendoline

Wow Shaun, I always admire a good powerful short. This is exactly that. So much food for thought in just three lines. Brilliant! You are  a voice for those people in vulnerable situations. You are a wise one my friend x 

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Shaun Cronick

Gwen many thanks and any comment from your good self is warmly welcomed and glad you liked it.
And I don't know about wise for I can be a real horse's arse sometimes.....
 just ask around!!!!👌
Thanks again Gwen and simply enjoy life and poetry and all the good things they both can happily bestow.❤️

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Jill Tait

Wow short precise and straight to the point ❤️💕❤️

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