DIMINISHED
There is a charge
Electric tingle
In the air
All around
Upon the ground
Where I stand
Diminished
I am....
Voyeur
Interloper
Inconsequential
The night is it's own
Awash with oceans of stars
Glittering ice points
Stark eerie beauty
Belonging only to itself
Already owned
Copyrighted
Not to we, not to me
I am voyeur
Interloper
Inconsequential
It's desolate vastness
Impossible
Indifferent
Alien
A Death wrapped up
In all beauty's might
Unholy space that romances
our sight
It reminds me
I am voyeur
Interloper
Inconsequential
I am less than invisible
Less than a speck
A fleeting moment
In the cosmos of time
And as I stand
In the blackness
Of our planets cold night
I am filled up
With fear
With terror
And fright.
Marion Price (2019)
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Comments
Hi MARION!!.....I like the word choices here.... they help create a tone that works well in conveying the darkness & fear that bleed into the idea of "DIMINISHED"...... but mostly I think its the flow created by your phrasing that I found most creative!!......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?❤
Thankyou Tony, truly, for reading and commenting and for the input, appreciated always ?