DO NOT KNOCK
Life is ours,
you are not bare
love is a beautiful gown to wear
and when I look at your eyes
I see threads of light
creating a feeling so bright,
I know I love you
I know I care!
Do not knock
my heart has no lock
push the door open
find a little corner
come and snug with me.
Do Not Knock
my hands know how to find you
they’ll always guide you
you’ll never be lost, my love.
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Thank you Baker. And how are you doing?
Love is a beautiful gown to wear - that line for me encapsulates your poem and it has a beauty all its own. I also really like your use of snug as a verb. And how could I not like your use of the noun threads. Great title and I like how you use it in your poem.
Thank you Bernie, you lovely as always. Warm wishes, B
P.S 20 years for Ken & Marie, it's a long time. May the good memories stay
and the bad ones discarded from their hearts.
This is what we call around here a proper love poem ..
I can imagine this whispered between 2 lovers over wine ( cider in my case lol)
a roaring fire and a candle lit dinner on a harsh winter night Bernadete...that's what it does for me and thankyou for the words that created the image...beautiful x
I am glad this poem gave you a good & peaceful image. May you have many more of those images, dear Marion. And a little cider too. Cheers!