Dogmatic
In the beginning naught did shine but light and hope and clouds they all had lustre,
Then the Journey snuffed it out.
In the beginning there swam free peace conscious and curious lives we hungered,
Then the Journey snuffed it out.
In the beginning both beast and man sweet harmony sang and we fed them and they fed us our joy,
Then the Journey snuffed it out.
In the beginning O’ heavens they were hallowed and unknown too was hallowed though thy name On High unknown,
Then the Journey snuffed it out.
In the beginning there was but green and blue and rustle and trickle and crack and splash all over,
Then the Journey snuffed it out.
In the beginning connected all did feel and balance all knew well,
And then the Journey snuffed it out.
In the end all was bleak exhaust flew through the cracks and poisoned,
The Cycle shall reset you.
In the end there was no peace and wonder was survival dead,
The Cycle shall reset you.
In the end the beasts lay caged or worse and mania-amaranthine so long beset them,
The Cycle shall reset you.
In the end the heavens all had clogged with hopeless quests to conquer,
Thy name unknown endured.
In the end there was no green or blue just black and endless thunder,
The Cycle shall reset you.
In the end the link it severed and all life fell asunder,
The Cycle shall reset you.
Dogmatic.
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Hey Sir RYAN!!......this is truly compelling, well conceived, and VERY well delivered!!......The cycle dictating........I love what you did with the lingo.......the repetition works BEAUTIFULLY and helps to drive home your intent.......but mostly I enjoyed the cleverness of the entirety of it ~ setting up the final "DOGMATIC" line perfectly!!......after all we all need to be told what to do......don't we?......smiles!!.......ALL STARS!!......Well done dear poet brother.....and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ?✴❤
Thank you so much Tony. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem, and I'm super excited to be here! It's lovely to have such a pleasant welcome, Love and rockets to you too brother!