Poem -
Don't Know Why
When the voice is silent the ears won't listen
And thoughts turn into fallacies and mysteries....an enigma
Unexpected space sends your mind into the dark
When no response is written you wanna give up and forget
Forget the time you gave that you can't take back
Forget the emotions that you felt for a friend you might not have
Memories you feel you wasted, but you can't say why
Hoping for a phone call or a text reply
So you wait patiently for the sun to rise again
For him to call you up and say "Hey there, friend"
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Hey LIZ!!.... interesting opening lines...... made me think of those sensory deprivation chambers !!........but then in the silence you found that singular voice speaking to friendships trials and tribulations ......VERY compelling piece sister girl!!.......ALL STARS!!.... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β ?β³β΄β
Wow! Your image makes sense. Thank u for finding a part of the poem I never thought about. :)
Reminds me of not only friendships but uncertain romantic relationships...when is he going to call? Β Brought back memories!*!*!
Yes, I can totally see that. Thank u for reading, :)
Brought back a lot of memories. Really beautiful. Keep on writing. I enjoyed it. :)
I'm glad. Thank u so much. :)