Poem -

our world

our world

tripping over what seems to be a never ending shade of black
that comes with the day and goes with the night
like the breakdown of the shakedown of the light
that grows in the minds of those who want to live
without people whose mouths say only "Me, Me, ME!!"
but that is the story of our society
no one cares about the trees or the bees
all they want is something for free
but the time will come soon
with the rise of the moon
when all hearts will collide
that is meant to be
for we are all one in this universe full of energy
why not fill it with love, grace, joy, and peace

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Liz Campbell

Thanks u, Poetess!! That means a lot coming from u.

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Being Me

Oh I love this, Liz.

tripping over what seems to be a never ending shade of black
that comes with the day and goes with the night
like the breakdown of the shakedown of the light

Excellent start to this...and for reading on we are rewarded withΒ more wordyΒ delights

but the time will come soon
with the rise of the moon
when all hearts will collide

Excellent writing (well I think so, anyway) x

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Liz Campbell

Thank u....I'm so glad u enjoyed it! πŸ™‚

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Tony Taylor

So VERY true LIZ!!...... we ARE all one...... and the more you study the physics of it...... We ARE all energy evolving....... making us ALL a part of one big universal truth...... so why not "fill it with love, grace, joy, and peace"......I LOVE this write...... so honestly filled with perfect poetic advice!!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!....... Bravo dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo. : )

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Liz Campbell

We Are all One. Thank u for your kind words. πŸ˜ŠπŸ’Ÿ

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