Poem -

Don’t Suppose You Remember

I don’t suppose,
for a single
moment after
   all these years ..
You still recall
a series
of otherwise
insignificant
   coincidences ..
All of which,
I hasten to add
occurred
within a micro
second, or less
of me
calling out your
   name ..
If it helps at all,
it was
the very same
day I talked
to a wall
   about our love ..
And I swear
that it heard me
   but blindly ..
That was when
a dream catcher
caught you
and the wind
chimes
   chimed for me ..

 

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Lorna

Hi Neville,
hope you are well and had a lovely xmas
This one really made me think about coincidence, maybe it's because I watched the Dr Who xmas special and it was about coincidence...hmm I see I theme here or maybe its more of a coincidence! Hahaha....but in the case of love...maybe its fate!
interesting piece 
lorca xx

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Neville

Hello Lorna, thank you .. I am well and had a super Christmas, probably the best one since my own kids were little .. was that a typo when you signed off lorca? ..

Lorca is the name of Leonard Cohens daughter now that would be a coincidence as I was just thinking about her while playing her brother Adams latest album xx 

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Lorna

Just a typo!! My dad is/was (since hes retired).a landscape gardener...a pretty good one but not famously so hahaha
glad you had a lovely Christmas ..we did too
LorNa xx

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Neville

How very kind .. thank you Marion .. sending a wish for a decent new year x

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