Poem -

Doomsday

It's been far too long

and the words are just unclear

the things I'd like to say to you

are the things I've begun to fear.

yet you hold me close and say it's alright

but the humming of doom is close in sight

i can see it spiraling down now

So you you I'll give a quick goodbye

and I won't linger on the why

for if I do it's will begin to rain

a storm will uprise within my brain

theyll lock me up in a little tin

ill end up in the looney bin

so to you I'll say a quick goodbye 

and stop thinking of you, I surely will try 

and I can't help wonder but how

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Tony Taylor

Hi Dani Paige!!.......never read you before (my loss)..........I REALLY like the way you use words........it's original...........the way you danced around your subject matter (Doomsday)..........to convey that "saying goodbye" was your doomsday.........was not only clever...........but VERY well delivered..........look forward to more my friend...   5*s   .........smiles.............T  xx

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