Poem -
Dork
I ripped your heart out, tossed it on the ground and kicked it in the dirt
you picked it up and brushed it off and said it didn't hurt
as shameful as I am I still thought I deserved a better guy
your wickedness and rotten temper ledĀ us to say goodbye
find a love with a heart of steel because mine is made of flowers
A new love waits for you and she is able to stand you for hours
I am sorry I have failed to be the one you really need
and egoĀ like yours cannot go hungry, for itĀ needs to feed
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Wow NOELLE!!...... this is a beautifully written dagger to the heart of "The one who feeds" upon the negativity found in the heart of intense relationships....... don't know ifĀ it isĀ written from personal experiences or just creativity .......but regardless....... It speaks honestly of the bastard type ......that give many men a "bad rep!" ~ if you will!!....... well conceived...... and once again...... BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....... fist full-o-STARS!!...... you can write girl!!....... compelling stuff....... your friend and admirer!!.......tony. xo. ?āā„
Ā Thank you so much Tony! Every time you review my work it just makes me more and more dedicated to always right and never stop because it is what I love it is my passion it is everything about me. We all put our hearts and souls and our work and to have somebody tell you that what you were doing and how you were feeling and the way that you release it is valued and important means more than anything to any writer. What matters more than money and fame to me is to have a legacy of my life so when I am gone maybe a part of me will not be forgotten by the ones I love. Thank you so much again Tony I hope you had a wonderful Valentine's Day. Hearts and kisses to you!
Oops and when using the speech text always check it before you press send. The English language has far too many words that sound exactly alike and let's face it this text messaging with the voice always comes out wrong. :-)Ā