Poem -
DOUBT
My feets are cold
With pain to gain my fame
I sat in front to step up,
But my shame has destroy my game
I dreamt in sight
I laugh in pain
I taste in sorrow
Feeling the shame i bear
With time to set my tie in path
But i see myself dwell in joy.
By Jerry Otor.
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Excellent Jerry good flow ....
I dreamt in sight
I laugh in pain
I taste in sorrow....I like these lines
Cheers..keep writing..my 5 stars to you..
I agree with Piusha they are great lines. Well done honey. Love G xx
@ piusha...... thank you so very much ..... you have also done well in you write up.......@ Georgina i like your poem as well . Computer.....lol