Poem - 31 October 2021, 00:59

Down by the coast 💙

Down by the coast 💙

Flap your feathered wings come fly with me

To taste yon salt and smell that sea

Soaring up above an aquatic ocean

Mesmerised amidst the moving motion

You may follow where I will lead

Our souls salvation shall burst and bleed

We shall dwell forever down by the coast

Happily haunting as a ghost…

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Being Me31 October 2021, 05:26

Our souls salvation shall burst and bleed

Ooooooh....what a gorgeous line!

Love the poem!

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Jill Tait31 October 2021, 05:28

Awww Thankx so much my poetic penfriend much appreciated ❤️🌹❤️

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Gwendoline31 October 2021, 05:37

Hello Jill, there is motion in the rhythm of your wonderful lines penned here. Beautifully conveyed as always my talented poet. I always love when you write about the sea 😊❤️

Gwen x

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Jill Tait31 October 2021, 06:15

Awwwww ❤️🌹❤️Thank you my lovely xx

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