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Down by the coast 💙

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Jill Tait
Down by the coast 💙

Flap your feathered wings come fly with me

To taste yon salt and smell that sea

Soaring up above an aquatic ocean

Mesmerised amidst the moving motion

You may follow where I will lead

Our souls salvation shall burst and bleed

We shall dwell forever down by the coast

Happily haunting as a ghost…
 

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Happiness
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Being Me

Our souls salvation shall burst and bleed

Ooooooh....what a gorgeous line!

Love the poem!

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Jill Tait

Awww Thankx so much my poetic penfriend much appreciated ❤️🌹❤️

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Gwendoline

Hello Jill, there is motion in the rhythm of your wonderful lines penned here. Beautifully conveyed as always my talented poet. I always love when you write about the sea 😊❤️

Gwen x

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Jill Tait

Awwwww ❤️🌹❤️Thank you my lovely xx

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