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Down In The Valley

Down In The Valley

Bryn Jones said that the mine was going to close,
what they would do then was difficult, nobody knows;
I went down three mines - salt, gypsum and gold,
in the latter, I went down five thousand feet, bold.

I found your heart in the strata, yellow and blue,
it had been there waiting to see what I would do,
I carefully levered it from the wall, so lovely,
was ready to look after, watch fine and love me.

When we came up to the surface, it was still warm,
I had to find a body, make sure that it came to no harm,
The Body Shop was just the place, beautiful figure,
a mind of it's own, told me to make sure I love her.

We left the shop, assembled, so lovely to hold,
then and forever, I would always call her gold.

 

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Tony Taylor

This is VERY creative TERRY!!....The last line topped it all off beautifully!!....you do these Sonnets well dear poet brother!!.....ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )
Ps..I tried to leave stars but it wasn't working properly! (Again : ( )

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Marion

Stunning write Terry...beautiful.emotion running through it all 💕

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Terry Reeves

Thanks Marion - you're very kind.
Love,
Terry.
x

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