Poem -
Dream state
Surreal panache bestowed,
As creative notion embowed.
My weary head I lay,
As pneuma deserts abode.
Luminescence shines bright,
Enchantment excites.
Celestial body a glow,
My inner dreams recite.
Waves of hue cascade,
Indigo, blue and jade,
Comely arch in spew,
Sprightly to fade.
Endearing lyrical ambience,
Flutter of sprite in dance.
The sky blends into the sea,
Incessantly romanced.
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Comments
simply gorgeous!
Thank you.Β You have helped me regain my confidence with my writing with your inspiring poetry.
You write so eloquently. I am glad I can do but a small part to help.Β
Wow!! Sir BROMLEY!!....... the VERY descriptive nature of your phrasing works BEAUTIFULLY!!......I have a song called "Dreamphase" that begins "I can see gray eyes, A faint lavender ray..."...... it reminds VERY much of your poem!!...... your word choices are perfect throughout!!.... giving the reader an excellent sense of being in the "Dream State" you so eloquently deliver here!!.......ALL STARS!!...... well done dear poet brother!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?β΄β€
Thank you so much. Β Means alot that you have taken the time to read it and more so that you enjoyed it. Β Respect my friend.Β