Dreams of her
I think of walking in a field of love
As birds fly over us singing above
Flowers shine with shimmery splendor
Yet it snows lightly as it is December
This place is not possible yet here we stand
Barefoot in the warm summer sand
I do not understand how it can snow well our feet feel the warmth of the sand
Yet I do not question it, for it has brought this chance for me to hold her hand
As we walk in the field of sand, flowers grow making a trial for which we pursue
Happiness over whelms us as we find our self on a cliff with a miraculous view
Looking over the seven seas as the sun drops below the mountain tops
Music begins to play as we dance on the cliff to a music box
The stars come out and shine for us
Shining enough light to see us blush
We know the day is coming to an end yet we cannot let go of this joy
For this adventure we both truly enjoyed
So we dance on the tip of mount adore
Until the sun rises forever more
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IZac River,
Beautiful lines of fragrance and love, interlinked with nature. I liked the below lines. Keep  your " writing stamina'skills ON " and pour more and more love lyrics. Congrats and thanksÂ
" As we walk in the field of sand, flowers grow making a trial for which we pursue
Happiness over whelms us as we find our self on a cliff with a miraculous view
Looking over the seven seas as the sun drops below the mountain tops"
I read between your  lines of your verse:  Sometimes, I really wonder whether the snow loves the trees and fields, that it kisses them so softly and gently. And then it covers them up homely, you know, with a white coverlet; and perhaps it says "Go to sleep, darlings, till the next summer comes again " . Your Love poem is almost same like this. Congrats and Keep writing again.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Regards & LoveÂ
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI