"DREAMS TAUNT" Co-write by Curious Onlooker and Valerie Lynn

Awakes in a mist like fog
All thoughts are like psychedelic
Mists get a gist of the odd
That she sees
I could hardly understand
How she's blocked from her dreams
Days turn into nights
And more days turn into nights
And all at once it's gone so blunt
For nights she runs in dreams she runs
In dreams she screams so softly
Let me wake
And while awake
It's, let me sleep
And while asleep
It all repeats
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A really creative partnership produces a work of magic !
Thanks for this inspirational collaboration !
:)
Wow! Thank you Richard!! It is a pleasure to write with CO!! Thank you for reading our poem!!
Val β₯
Hello Val and Curious...
Great Co-write...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thanks Sparrowsong! :)
CO
wonderful write.
Thank you sweetie!!
Val β₯
Great Co-write..
Thank you Mark!! I appreciate the comment and you taking the time to read our work!!
Val β₯
Dear Valerie & Curious Onlooker,
Good co-write, thanks for sharing, much applause,
Love & hugs
Willy
Thank you BigBro!! Your comments are always much appreciated!!
Val β₯
ANYTHING VAL TOUCH BECOME GOLD ...MAYNE
Mayne!! You seriously just made my night!! Much Love to You!! Thank you for the amazing comment!!
Val β₯