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"DREAMS TAUNT" Co-write by Curious Onlooker and Valerie Lynn

"DREAMS TAUNT" Co-write by Curious Onlooker and Valerie Lynn

Awakes in a mist like fog

All thoughts are like psychedelic

Mists get a gist of the odd

That she sees

I could hardly understand

How she's blocked from her dreams

Days turn into nights

And more days turn into nights

And all at once it's gone so blunt

For nights she runs in dreams she runs

In dreams she screams so softly

Let me wake

And while awake

It's, let me sleep

And while asleep

It all repeats

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Richard Waters

A really creative partnership produces a work of magic !

Thanks for this inspirational collaboration !

:)

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Valerie Lynn

Wow! Thank you Richard!! It is a pleasure to write with CO!! Thank you for reading our poem!!

Val β™₯

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sparrowsong

Hello Val and Curious...

Great Co-write...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Mark!! I appreciate the comment and you taking the time to read our work!!

Val β™₯

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Valerie & Curious Onlooker,

Good co-write, thanks for sharing, much applause,

Love & hugs

Willy

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you BigBro!! Your comments are always much appreciated!!

Val β™₯

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Valerie Lynn

Mayne!! You seriously just made my night!! Much Love to You!! Thank you for the amazing comment!!

Val β™₯

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